Phil went through the animatic I edited on Monday, and there is so much to be edited! I didn't realise the staggering amount of fundamental mistakes I had made, for example, 2 doors open even though only one hand was pushing the door.
Shots i needed to edit:
1) walking to door, use the same shot as the one before for continuity
2) use two hands to open the door
3) Change the wide shot of Auton to a worm's eye view (to make him look powerful)
4) Pan up Auton from his boots to his face
5) Move both his hands to show that they show that they open the door
6) Make Auton look up from the worm's eye view shot instead from the wide shot
5) Change the horse silhouette to make it more intimidating as well as the angle
6) Push in the camera of the reaction shot
7) Central Auton in the reaction shot
8) Change the angle of the step back to a back shot so that we can see the horse as well
9) Make Derrie look at Auton first then turn to the problem (the sound effect should be from the cleaner)
10) Use the same shoulder shot and move Auton from there, get rid of the bad cuts
With all of that in mind, I edited and came up with this:
Shots i needed to edit:
1) walking to door, use the same shot as the one before for continuity
2) use two hands to open the door
3) Change the wide shot of Auton to a worm's eye view (to make him look powerful)
4) Pan up Auton from his boots to his face
5) Move both his hands to show that they show that they open the door
6) Make Auton look up from the worm's eye view shot instead from the wide shot
5) Change the horse silhouette to make it more intimidating as well as the angle
6) Push in the camera of the reaction shot
7) Central Auton in the reaction shot
8) Change the angle of the step back to a back shot so that we can see the horse as well
9) Make Derrie look at Auton first then turn to the problem (the sound effect should be from the cleaner)
10) Use the same shoulder shot and move Auton from there, get rid of the bad cuts
With all of that in mind, I edited and came up with this:
With all the updates and things to remember, I was noting all of the things on post it notes while Phil wrote down the shots.