Last week, we had requested our client to be present for our animatic that we have compiled from the storyboards. After watching the animatic, which was rough (but does get the point across) and really quick paced, Ian ended up suggesting a better shot list so that we would have better pacing.
Part one has more of the problems, so i noted them all down:
Part 1:
1) Establishing shot of school
2) Door shot
3) Auton Establishing shot (pan up)
4) Shadow on floor with two strangers walking in
5) Close up of gun man 1
6) Close up of gun man 2
7) Ots high angle strangers, Auton looks smaller
8) Auton steps back
9) Auton panicked look around (mid close up)
10) Strangers waving
11) Extreme Close up shot of hand on Auton's shoulder
12) Est. Derrie with hand on Auton's shoulder (pushed back layout)
13) Cut to Derrie Close up (getting an idea)
14) Derrie's pov of his hand
15) Mid close up shot of Derrie Charge forward
16) Strangers get plastered
17) Sfx: silence... Auton looks at Derrie
18) Auton calms down as he looks at Derrie
19) Strangers transform back to humans (reality)
20) Strangers say Bye bye
21) Two Shot of Auton and Derrie together
22) Close up shot of Derrie holding Auton's hand (walk to classroom)
24) Fade to black to Part 2
After the long meeting, I went to start on a missed prop that nobody had designed yet, the water gun that Auton used.
Part one has more of the problems, so i noted them all down:
Part 1:
1) Establishing shot of school
2) Door shot
3) Auton Establishing shot (pan up)
4) Shadow on floor with two strangers walking in
5) Close up of gun man 1
6) Close up of gun man 2
7) Ots high angle strangers, Auton looks smaller
8) Auton steps back
9) Auton panicked look around (mid close up)
10) Strangers waving
11) Extreme Close up shot of hand on Auton's shoulder
12) Est. Derrie with hand on Auton's shoulder (pushed back layout)
13) Cut to Derrie Close up (getting an idea)
14) Derrie's pov of his hand
15) Mid close up shot of Derrie Charge forward
16) Strangers get plastered
17) Sfx: silence... Auton looks at Derrie
18) Auton calms down as he looks at Derrie
19) Strangers transform back to humans (reality)
20) Strangers say Bye bye
21) Two Shot of Auton and Derrie together
22) Close up shot of Derrie holding Auton's hand (walk to classroom)
24) Fade to black to Part 2
After the long meeting, I went to start on a missed prop that nobody had designed yet, the water gun that Auton used.
Using a standard shape that I had Ian approve, I designed the above designs that looks not too like a real gun but still has the western look. Still unsure, which one to go with...